Article writing practice

I have started working on my article writing skills, and done the insane thing by putting them out there for anyone and everyone to critique.

Check out my first "critique this" article at Freelancer's Office, where I address the question, Who Controls Creative Work? The Creator or the Fans? Feel free to leave any constructive criticism on the article, I am trying to improve my article writing skills, and the best way I can think to sharpen them is to write a few articles that can be openly reviewed by others.

Thank you!